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"Cool"

That turned out pretty good. PM me later and I can tell you how to turn down the music so you can hear the sound effects. If you ask me that yesterday we could've fix that mistake. Other than that it was pretty tight. Every scene made since, which is a key part to have in all great flashes.

My favorite part was when Alex and Talex was in the box fighting and Alex ran up the wall!

HellBentGoose responds:

haha YOU made that part! I didn't know what to add on to it, so I did the uppercut.

"That Was Cool"

That was pretty cool. If get better sprites maybe this flash would've gotten a HIGHER SCORE. I know where to get some good Goku sprites. PM me if you want to know.

"OK'

Problems:

1. Use music music that you haven't used before. (I heard Kraid's theme in your Metroid game yesterday.)
2. Needs some actual backgrounds from the game(s)
3. Better Plot
4. Text boxes

Comments:
Overall it was ok nothing spectacular. Umm....needs alittle work but nothing major. Good Job.

"It was okay"

It was okay for your first flash. The animation seemed alittle slow.
This flash needs a plot because the title is misleading. What is this flash about?

PHILLIAMS responds:

WELL IM IN A GROUP...HIPHOP GROUP CALLED THE CAREERKILLAZ...THIS WAS JUST A TEST TO SEE WHAT IT WOULD LOOK LIKE IF I ANIMATED US...THATS ALL...
I WANT TO DO MORE....JUSS GOTTA DECIDE WHAT TO DO!!! TUFF DECISION....GOT ANY IDEAS??????

"Well"

Well, the only thing I can say is try to animate your character. Try to make it where he doesn't look like a 2D character.

"The Epic Nose Pick"

THE NOSE PICK HEARD AROUND THE WORLD! Anyways I knew he was going to pick his nose but, I still wanted to see how. Whats next after this?

"Ok"

The plot is kinda of wierd. The animation is very choppy. The flash is missing it's key ingredient which is music. Make some text boxes. Drawings are ok, but the explosion wasn't very good. Work on the animation and you'll do fine....next time.

Darktayle responds:

Thanks. I agree, It definitely needs work. I need to figure out how to crop music before I add any, though, since I don't have anything that lasts for only 56 seconds.

"It Was Okay"

It was alright a tad on the short side to be a stick movie.
Umm...the effects were pretty tight. How did you draw them?
Stick running animation needs alittle more work. Theres a tutorial on stick animation on newgrounds.
Next time have a faster pace song, a song that will go great with your flash.

M-GOD responds:

Thanks. In answer to your question i just drew the effects like everything else and added a couple glow and blur effects to them.

"Old"

I've seen this thousands of times already. Try using a different character and a different song.

"Needs More Work"

DO YOU DO PARKOUR BECAUSE I DO FOR FUN! My favorite vault is the monkey vault.
Enough about me, now on with the review.

Needs:
1. Music
2. Sound Effects
3. More time spent ito this flash

Comments:
I think if you spend more time into this flash it'll be something cool to watch!
Overall, it's refreshing to know that I'm not the only one who knows about Parkour.

Well I make flash and art, what else do you want to know................
...perverts!

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